Post - Pitch

We have received some useful feedback for our pitch, one of the comments we received was that its very suitable for our target audience and it was not original but suitability is good. This is quite useful as it changes the perspective we could take on the originality of the music video, such as we could change some things around and see what works best. Another comment we received was that we need to pin down the narrative aspect and we need to look at videos such as The Beatles 'Hard Days Night' I think this feedback is very useful as it gives us an idea of what the video will consist of for example if its going to be low-fi or the editing of the colour to be black and white to give off more of an indie feel to the video. In response to this feedback we have to take into account what has been said and what we can do, we will obviously have to adjust to what our audience think is best and what we think is most suitable for who we are aiming for.